Friday, May 31, 2002

Star Wars - Episode II: Attack of the Clones
A Review by Steven Hawk

The Conclusion
[continued from Part 2 below]

In the end, if you are looking for action and adventure in the mythical Star Wars universe, Episode II delivers. If you are looking for a genuine romance and a compelling tale of well-drawn characters, well, you may be a little disappointed. This isn't Shakespeare. It's Star Wars. A few corny lines of dialogue are to be expected, even cherished by fans of the series. If this installment goes a little overboard on the corn, oh well. In the words of Han Solo, "Laugh it up, furball."

And now for Part 2 of...

Star Wars - Episode II: Attack of the Clones
A Review by Steven Hawk

[continued from Part 1 below]

It is the director's job to elicit convincing performances from his actors and to frame the scenes in such a way that the audience is drawn into what is happening to and between the characters. Lucas fails to wring a convincing delivery of his romantic dialogue from these actors, and his choice of scenes in which to develop the romance seems simplistic and contrived. For an action film, even a romantic one, there are too many "talking-head" scenes. Less standing, sitting or just walking while talking, and more active dialogue tied into other actions the characters are involved in together might have been an improvement.

Rather than the romance seeming to develop slowly over the course of the adventure (as it did, by the way, in the original Star Wars trilogy between Princess Leia and Han Solo), we are presented with a couple of initial scenes where Anakin dives in and flirts, rather menacingly, with Amidala. But Amidala's reaction to his flirtations seems ambiguous for several scenes until Anakin moves in for a kiss. We don't see a gradual recognition or flicker of loving appreciation in her before this event. We do see her develop that in a later scene as the two picnic in a waterfall shrouded field, but the timing of events is off. The kiss has already happened, she let it happen, even though we haven't been treated to any real evidence that she might be feeling something back for him. And so the audience - who just happen to know what is going to happen, what has to happen anyway - is left laughing at the predictable and corny romantic interactions between the characters.

I suppose what I may be getting to with this line of criticism is a little second guessing - which is admittedly easy to do from behind a keyboard - of the selection of scenes and framing of dialogue for the best development and progression of the romantic storyline. Indeed, I would even say that Lucas could have afforded to introduce more scenes between Portman and Christensen building the romance through meaningful actions and interactions within the plot and less of the political intrigue involving the Jedi.

And then there are the special effects, which by now everyone (or at least everyone who follows these sorts of things) knows are now done almost entirely within a computer. By and large, the effects are spectacular. But more often than I would like, the veil of the digital magic is too thin. We can see through it and recognize that what we are seeing is not real but rather the creation of a digital artist. Something seems a little… off. Perhaps this is where the sophistication of the audience comes back to bite Lucas. He has done so much through his ILM effects company to advance the art and technology of special effects, and particularly that of digital effects, that audiences (like me) come to expect more from them. More times than I wish, scenes involving the interaction of live actors with digitally created characters or creatures seemed poorly integrated. Something just seemed wrong with the way the live actors moved on or about the digital creatures that shattered the illusion.

And I, for one, felt that the use of digital animation to create the character Yoda, rather than using an advanced muppet - as was the case for most of the previous films, didn't hold up to close examination onscreen in this film. Granted, it was necessary and entirely believable when Yoda was in action, as in the final scenes of the film. Such action scenes could never have been done with a live-action puppet. But in the close-ups of Yoda's face during his important dialogue scenes, his face seemed to morph as he spoke rather than articulate naturally. Perhaps this is because of what we have come to expect from the puppet Yoda that we all know and love from the previous films. But for whatever reason, it was noticeable to me and thus detracted from the sense of immersion in the fictional universe of the story.

Then again, with regard to the above observations, perhaps I need to see the film projected digitally, as Lucas asserts is the best way to view this digitally shot and produced film. The Lee Highway Multiplex in Merrifield, VA is presenting this movie digitally projected on one of its screens. When I get a chance to see that version, I may need to revise some of these comments

All that being said, I have to give credit to Ewan McGregor for his portrayal of the wise Jedi Obi-Wan Kenobi. Obi-Wan's progression from young Jedi apprentice in Episode I to a seasoned Jedi Master in Episode II is complete and believable. Even working with some wooden dialogue, McGregor has deftly worked his portrayal of Obi-Wan into a convincing foretaste of the character that will one day become the wise old wizard Ben of the original film. Indeed, there was plenty of foreshadowing sprinkled throughout the rest of the movie, including in the music, as John Williams briefly hit tones from the "Imperial March," Darth Vader's theme, as Anakin begins his descent into the Dark Side.

And the action and battle scenes are truly riveting. Perhaps better than anything seen in Star Wars so far. The final planet-bound battle compares favorably to the ice planet battle of Episode V, "The Empire Strikes Back." It is complex, frantic and superbly effected. This is one area where the digital effects technology really shines. Perhaps because we do not have as much an expectation of reality as we do for character close-ups. But there is no denying that in this one realm, Lucas is still The Master. The inevitable light-saber battles between the bad guys and the good guys (and this time there are plenty of both) are frenzied and well done, by and large. And the aforementioned action scene involving Yoda… well, it's safe to say - Yoda rocks! Sorry, had to slip into fandom just a bit there.

[coming soon, the conclusion...]

As promised, here is part 1 of...

Star Wars - Episode II: Attack of the Clones

A Review by Steven Hawk

written: May 17, 2002

Maybe I have become too cynical. Perhaps my expectations were too high. It's possible I know too much now about the trickery of modern special effects. And maybe I am too knowledgeable (not to pat myself on the back or anything) about the background and details of this particular tale. But for whatever reason, I was a little disappointed with "Star Wars - Episode II: Attack of the Clones." Now, don't get me wrong, I would still recommend seeing the movie to anyone. I am a Star Wars fan, after all. And I know that nothing I say, or that anyone could say, would or should dissuade a true fan of the saga from seeing this particular installment. In fact, as a nearly life-long fan who, as a thirteen-year old boy, gaped in awe at the original film back in 1977, just seeing the opening titles to this film is almost worth the price of admission, even with all it's flaws.

I am, however, left with the conclusion that George Lucas has lost the magic, or at least some of the magic, that infused the original Star Wars. Perhaps he's too close to his own creation. Perhaps he has tackled too many roles in the making of these prequels to his 1977 masterpiece, "Star Wars" (now known in terms of the Star Wars saga as "Star Wars: Episode IV: A New Hope"). And perhaps we have a case of the Emperor's new clothes. No one in Lucasfilm's empire is willing to tell the boss - the man who created Star Wars and Indiana Jones - that something is awry.

As to the particulars of this movie, there is a lot to nitpick even as there is a lot to admire. First, and foremost, the dialogue is more stilted and corny than in any previous Star Wars film. To be fair, dialogue has never been the strong suit of the Star Wars films. If you are looking for engaging dialogue and multidimensional character interactions, you shouldn't be looking for them in a Star Wars film. But Lucasfilm has billed "Attack of the Clones," title notwithstanding, as the romantic centerpiece of the saga. And the dialogue between the central romantic characters, Anakin Skywalker (as portrayed by Hayden Christensen) and Padme Amidala (portrayed by Natalie Portman), simply fails to convey a sense of genuine love developing between two young people. We can fault the dialogue in the script as being wooden and more than a little corny - the audience I saw the film with laughed at almost every romantic exchange between these two characters. We can fault the actors' delivery of those lines. Christensen, though convincing in his portrayal of the anger, bitterness and dark emotions boiling within Anakin, is less than convincing in the more tender scenes with Natalie Portman's Amidala. And for her part, Portman's portrayal of Amidala fails to convince us why she might be falling for the troubled Anakin in the first place. Her wide-eyed gazes at Anakin seem to be all she has to offer. We know, fro mthe story, that Anakin has had a crush on Amidala since he was a boy, as seen in "Episode I." But why the older Amidala would be falling for the young man she knew as Little Annie isn't made clear. However, we know that Portman and Christensen both are capable of better, evidenced by the other work, as are all the human actors in this film. But the real fault here is not Christensen's or Portman's, it is that of the writer and the director, who just happen to be the same person in this case.

[continued in part 2, coming soon]

Thursday, May 30, 2002

Well, I'm giving this blog thing a shot. Since I wanted to practice my writing, this seems like a good way to start. Unfortunately, I can't come up with something interesting to say right now as I have been focusing on keeping my computer connected to the web to sign up for blogger and blogspot. Now that I'm "published," I suppose I'll have to think up some inciteful comments. Maybe I'll post the review I wrote of Star Wars - Episode II: Attack of the Clones two weeks ago. Or maybe not.

Seeya - srhawk